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Annette Sharp's avatar

Ominous and obsessive. Oppressive ownership . You hit the big ‘O’s, MJ! 👍 😊

MJ Polk's avatar

Obviously😁 Thanks Anne!

Annette Sharp's avatar

😂🖤🖤

MJ Polk's avatar

Totally was going with…I guess so… but couldn’t resist!

Martine 🦋's avatar

I love this MJ, as well as the picture. Cool vibe.... 🖤❤️

MJ Polk's avatar

Yay! That means a lot coming from you Martine🖤 Thank you 🙏

Martine 🦋's avatar

🙏🏻✨️🦋🖤

Good Boy Records's avatar

It's a cool poem MJ. Liked it. Love the image that goes with it also. Never be afraid to 'toolsmax' for a great image.

MJ Polk's avatar

Thanks! Happy Writing Colin!🤠🤙

Harriet Corvine's avatar

Wow, MJ!

Good job! This kinda resonates with those lines that I shared as closing lines of a poem of mine a few days ago. :)

The quiet insinuation, the repetition does make your otherwise Innocent poem sinister. I love it! And thanks for nominating it to the contest!

MJ Polk's avatar

You should definitely share that poem H!

Harriet Corvine's avatar

I am about to. :)

Harriet Corvine's avatar

and this makes me revisit mine,

which I kinda dismissed

and only shared those last few lines. ;)

Thanks, MJ!

MJ Polk's avatar

Yup! We were on the same wavelength that day H! I'm pretty sure I'd written my draft and then saw you note and read yours that afternoon. Thank you for reading, and accepting it as my submission to your poetry contest! Happy Writing H!🤠🤙

Jennifer Haddock's avatar

Love it! Haven’t read Milk and Honey yet. And didn’t know if your best sellers list, so that’s fun too.

MJ Polk's avatar

Oh, you're in for a treat then! Thanks Jennifer 🙏 Happy Valentine's week🤍